User talk:125.99.186.66

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Hello, 125.99.186.66! Welcome to Wikivoyage.

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By the way, have you considered creating an account here? While you can absolutely keep contributing as an anonymous user, it promises a bunch of benefits, and no obligations.

Also, please read welcome, business owners and don't tout. I will critique your listing, which I've moved here for the purpose:

  • V RESORTS RAJAJI NATIONAL PARK, Gauhari Range,Haridwar- Rishikesh Highway, Kharakmaf, Haridwar, Uttarakhand 249306 (By Air: Nearest airport is Dehradun Airport(35km) , By Rail: Nearest railway station is Rishikesh Railway Station(18km), By Road: Delhi(230km)), 0120 400 4800, . Conveniently located between the famous pilgrim towns of Haridwar and Rishikesh in Uttarakhand, the Rajaji National Park encompasses an area of 820 sq km. The park is home to a number of animals such as elephants, tigers, sloth beat and several species of deer, besides hundreds of species of birds

First problem: Don't use ALL-CAP TEXT.

Second: Although this isn't a touting issue, please omit default address information (Haridwar, etc.).

Third: Directions need to be specific to the hotel, not the distance from Delhi to Haridwar, etc.

Fourth: Again a formatting and not a touting issue: Phone numbers should start with +91, for the convenience of people who would phone you from abroad. See how phone numbers are formatted in other hotel listings in the Haridwar article.

Fifth: The "content" you provide is all about the park! None of that should be in your listing, which is about your hotel. If you want to add to coverage of Rajaji National Park, there is already a listing in "Do", which I'd encourage you to edit. But as for the "content" tab, it should contain a description of specific things about the hotel.

After you've read the don't tout page and my remarks, if you have any questions, please post them in a reply below. Thanks.

Best,

Ikan Kekek (talk) 09:23, 31 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]


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