User talk:Hostelsri

Hello, welcome to Wikivoyage, and please read welcome, business owners and don't tout. Thanks, and let us know if you have any questions by posting below. Ikan Kekek (talk) 06:34, 15 January 2016 (UTC)

You need to pay attention to this message and read the don't tout page, or all your edits will be reverted on sight and it will become necessary to block your posting privileges. Ikan Kekek (talk) 11:06, 16 January 2016 (UTC)

I read don't tout right after you posted it and fixed the entry removing "we" word as you wanted. Please advice what you feel there was still touting and wrong? What was wrong with alphabetical ordering that you removed as well? --Hostelsri (talk) 13:33, 17 January 2016 (UTC)

Let's look at this example. The following things are touting: (1) Using "alt" to repost your name in a different order (if your hotel has no alternate or former name, leave this tab blank). (2) Mentioning your name again in "content" is borderline, but certainly not necessary. (3) Mentioning its location again there is certainly not necessary. (4) You touted the park. A "sleep" listing is not an appropriate place to discuss the popularity of a park. (5) The second sentence is pretty flowery.

Did you look carefully at the "Good" and "Bad" examples at don't tout? You should try to adopt a "just the facts" tone.

The current version is better, but that fake "alt" name has got to go.

I'm not sure what you mean by alphabetical ordering. Which article did I put out of alphabetical order? Ikan Kekek (talk) 23:58, 17 January 2016 (UTC)

I forgot to thank you for reading and trying to work within this site's guidelines. That's much appreciated. Ikan Kekek (talk) 00:01, 18 January 2016 (UTC)