User talk:Xfnfanniexu

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Hello, Xfnfanniexu! Welcome to Wikivoyage.

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Please also read don't tout and follow the "Good" example of hotel listings, not the "Bad" example. Let's look at one of the listings you inputted:

  • 1 Fairytale Yi Su Hotspring Hotel (艺宿商旅礁溪馆 - 童话艺宿汤旅), No. 51-1, Wenquan Road Jiaoxi, Yilan County 262 Taiwan, +88639887777, . Check-in: 14:00, check-out: 12:00. Located 400 m from Tangweigou Hot Spring Park in Jiaoxi, Fairytale Yi Su Hotel features free WiFi access and free private parking. Each room at this inn is air conditioned and is fitted with a flat-screen TV with satellite channels. You will find a kettle in the room. Each room has a private bathroom fitted with a bathtub. For your comfort, you will find slippers, free toiletries and a hairdryer. There is a 24-hour front desk at the property. Jiaoxi Hot Springs Park is 501 m from Fairytale Yi Su Hotel, and Wufengchi Waterfall is 2.7 km away. Taipei Songshan Airport is 33.8 km from the property. ¥¥.

The first problem was that you put it at the very end of the article after all the codes that must go after all text, but that said:

You are using the "name" and "alt" tabs correctly to provide the English- and Chinese-language names. However, since you are posting in the Jiaoxi page, please omit everything but the street address (No. 51-1, Wenquan Road).

But where the real problems happen is in "content":

First, why are you putting in hard paragraph code? Perhaps because you are copy-pasting directly from a hotel website? If so, that's a big no-no that you need to stop doing right away.

Second, "400 m from Tangweigou Hot Spring Park" could go in "directions", and Jiaoxi shouldn't be mentioned at all.

Third: "For your comfort" is a cliche of hotel promotions. Omit that.

Fourth: "Jiaoxi Hot Springs Park is 501 m from Fairytale Yi Su Hotel, and Wufengchi Waterfall is 2.7 km away. Taipei Songshan Airport is 33.8 km from the property."

Would you also like to say how far Japan and the Philippines are? You've provided geocoordinates. Omit all of this location touting.

Please try again, but if you ignore my critique and the don't tout page and simply edit war, you are likely to have your posting privileges suspended very quickly.

All the best,

Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:26, 16 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]