User talk:2409:4071:210F:61C8:3FF1:F2CA:86F9:68CA
Hi. I guess you read Wikivoyage:Don't tout, but not carefully enough, and it would probably help for you to also read Wikivoyage:Words to avoid and Wikivoyage:Capitalization. Here's your listing:
- 1 Hotel Sri Velmurugan (Hotel Velmurugan), Walsham Road, Green fields, Ooty (On the road connecting Alankar Theatre (in Ettines road) and the Commercial Road), ☏ +91 9944817139, +91 423-2444968, hotelsrivelmurugan@gmail.com. 6AM to 11PM. (Website) Traditional South Indian Restaurant offering Authentic and Affordable South Indian Delicacies. Moderate.
First problem: "alt" is for genuinely alternate names, not merely a shortened version of your name. Second: Ooty is default address info and should be omitted. Third: Instead of "Moderate", which is not defined, give examples of prices or a useful price range. Fourth: Don't provide your website again in content. Fifth: most of those words shouldn't be capitalized, and "affordable" is a meaningless promotional word.
I'll detout and clean up the listing this time, but please work harder to avoid problems in the future. Thanks. Ikan Kekek (talk) 23:47, 22 June 2019 (UTC)
- Detouted version. Please add real prices in the "price" tab, and you can add some specialities in "content" if you like. Ikan Kekek (talk) 23:49, 22 June 2019 (UTC)
This is the discussion page for an anonymous user who has not created an account yet, or who does not use it. We therefore have to use the numerical IP address to identify them. Such an IP address can be shared by several users. If you are an anonymous user and feel that irrelevant comments have been directed at you, please create an account or log in to avoid future confusion with other anonymous users.