Talk:Route 62

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Purple prose and 1st-person pronouns[edit]

A cursory review of this article shows that it needs a lot of help. I'm too jetlagged to start editing now, but if anyone who sees this would please help, it would be much-appreciated. Ikan Kekek (talk) 04:28, 14 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

@Ikan Kekek: I heard your call, and have started the copyedit. I hope you have recovered from your jet-lag by now. Ground Zero (talk) 01:37, 10 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Indeed I have, though I've been busy traveling. Ikan Kekek (talk) 08:20, 10 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I've taken a couple of runs at it. It would benefit from review by more editors to catch things that I've over-crowded. Ground Zero (talk) 12:01, 11 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]