Talk:Taierzhuang

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I added a banner Bai0926 (talk) 05:45, 14 October 2024 (UTC)

Please review my article

I edited this article, please check it for me, thank you Bai0926 (talk) 05:46, 6 December 2024 (UTC)

The article has an overweight of encyclopedic information, e.g. hydrology, topography and geomorphology are not standard headings in Wikivoyage. This is not a major problem (although they probably should be trimmed and reworded), but in practical sections, such as Get in, wordings should be adjusted to concentrate on the practical issues. The strategical location can be mentioned in passing, but travellers are not that interested in how many airports and railway stations there are. Instead there should be listing for them, with info on where they are, from where there are connections and how points of interests (accommodation, sights etc.) are reached from them. The names should be mentioned also in Chinese, so that they can be recognised in timetables and signs.

There was no Get around. At a minimum it should refer to the Get around section of Zaozhuang, with some remarks on anything that differs from that general information. If there are hubs for transport in the district, such as places where you can transfer when there is no direct connection from a place in one area of the district to one in another. What about congestion, parking and biking safety compared to other parts of Zaozhuang?

For the wetlands and the Ancient Town, it would be good to shortly describe how large they are and how you can get around in them: are they small enough that you just get off the bus and take a look, or would they be worth a half-day visit with a packed lunch?

Now the listing for the Ancient Town includes info that clearly belongs in Get in – was there some involuntary cut and paste at time of creating the listing? There is similar misplaced info also later in the section.

The eat section should contain info on how easy it is get to eat, and perhaps descriptions of areas where restaurants are easy to find. There should also be listings for a few outstanding or conveniently situated restaurants in different price categories.

For Drink, is there some nightlife in the district? For European cities you would typically list some cafés, some pubs and some nightclubs, perhaps also other kinds of venues where you might spend the late evening and part of the night. Where would you get to taste the Old Youghurt?

Are there any hotels or hostels in the area or would you need to get in from other parts of Zaozhuang for the day? As most travellers will want to make reservations in advance, there needs to be listings with contact details and short descriptions (so that one knows whether this accommodation is where one wants to stay).

–LPfi (talk) 08:14, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

Hello, thank you for your review. I read it carefully and modified a lot of content. I added Chinese for all scenic spots and transportation hubs. I reduced the encyclopedic expressions, added the area of ​​scenic spots and transportation introductions in the get in introduction, and selected restaurants and hotels with good reviews and reputations in the China Travel app and added them to the homepage. However, since Taierzhuang is a district and the economy is not very developed, the nightlife is not particularly rich. Bai0926 (talk) 22:29, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

Did you think this section, complete with a useless footnote number, was not encyclopedic? Few visitors will care what the exact number of hectares of water features are in this district or how many rivers or ponds there are. Did you cite your source in your edit summary when you added that stuff, by the way? Ikan Kekek (talk) 22:44, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

I think you are right，so I deleted the water system content.

Most of my information comes from relevant websites in China. I filled in the information for scenic spot bus stations that have official websites. For those that do not have official websites, I found reliable information through third-party websites and then edited them. Bai0926 (talk) 23:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

You should credit your sources in edit summaries or post them on this page. Also, make sure you are paraphrasing and not violating fair use, as defined on Wikivoyage:Copyleft. Ikan Kekek (talk) 00:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)