Talk:Yuzhou

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I changed File:Mena-asia default banner.jpgto File:Yuzhouzhan.jpg.I think it is good.악준동 (talk) 06:10, 31 October 2022 (UTC)

"Districts" section from article

There is nowhere near enough content in this article for us to even consider district articles at this point, if ever. However, some of the information laid out in this section might be useful if adapted suitably. An "Orientation" subsection could be created in "Understand," with advice to visitors about which neighborhoods to visit for what and how to recognize one from another:

Yuzhou City Centre

Ancient City District The historic center of Yuzhou, famous for its ancient kilns, cultural heritage, and traditional architecture.

West District A developing urban area, known for its educational institutions and modern residential complexes.

North District An industrial and cultural mix, featuring the Yuzhou Museum and several local temples.

South District A quieter residential district, with scenic parks and access to the surrounding hills.

East District A thriving commercial zone with shopping centers and entertainment venues.

Jiaxian Scenic Area A natural area near the mountains, known for its hiking trails and historical sites.

Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:11, 14 October 2024 (UTC)

Enhance the appeal of the introduction

The information about the historical importance of Yuzhou is abundant, but you can add some description of the unique charm of Yuzhou at the beginning. You can add a sentence to highlight its historical atmosphere and cultural appeal. Mcx8202229 (talk) 05:12, 8 November 2024 (UTC)

Constructive suggestions

I think it could be enriched by including some more pictures HYH031277777 (talk) 12:49, 9 November 2024 (UTC)

I agree. Ikan Kekek (talk) 16:06, 9 November 2024 (UTC)

I still think this is true. Hanyuanyuan613, this is something else you could work on. Ikan Kekek (talk) 13:28, 15 December 2024 (UTC)

Request: Please review my article

I am a university student, and as part of a school assignment, I am working on a Wikivoyage article about Yuzhou, China.

I would greatly appreciate your feedback on the article. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 03:51, 15 December 2024 (UTC)

Some quick thoughts: There's a lot of content in this article, and that's great. However, please remove default address information like "Yuzhou City" from addresses. Also, in the "Buy" section, "Various locations in Yuzhou" is not useful information. Is there no way you could list all the addresses? If not, could you at least give a URL and phone number? If not, I'd suggest not using a listing template but just stating that "in addition to the listings below, look for various places around town that sell porcelain and local handicrafts." Ikan Kekek (talk) 06:40, 15 December 2024 (UTC)

Thank you very much for your suggestion, I have made the changes. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 10:04, 15 December 2024 (UTC)

Thanks, much better! One further thing occurred to me: I think "Varies by product" is unnecessary to state in "price" for a market. Everyone would assume so. Ikan Kekek (talk) 13:02, 15 December 2024 (UTC)

I just looked at your latest edits. This article is shaping up very nicely! I'd love it if Yuzhou could be a Destination of the month at some point. Ikan Kekek (talk) 19:15, 15 December 2024 (UTC)

@Ikan Kekek :) But the class assignment is almost over, so I think that's about all we can help with here... Hanyangprofessor2 (talk) 07:40, 17 December 2024 (UTC)

Unless User:Hanyuanyuan613 or someone else who's knowledgeable about the city would like to volunteer to edit recreationally like the rest of us. We always hope some of the people who participate in editathons and class assignments decide to stay. But if they'd prefer not to do something like add more thumbnails, someone else could, even if they don't know the city, as long as there are useful pictures of the city on Commons. Ikan Kekek (talk) 08:28, 17 December 2024 (UTC)

Folks, this article is almost at Guide level. See Wikivoyage:City article status. The one thing that's clearly missing, if we go by the book, is one-liner descriptions of "Go next" destinations. Would you like to work on that, User:Hanyuanyuan613? Or at least give some examples of the "surrounding towns" mentioned in Go next (so "Buses run frequently to surrounding towns such as [names of a few towns] for less than ¥10..."). This article also surely still needs more images from Commons if you'd like to add some, but anyone can try doing that if there are good choices. Ikan Kekek (talk) 09:48, 21 December 2024 (UTC)