User talk:Beamanlepirate

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Guidelines on advertising

Hello, Beamanlepirate. Please read don't tout, which will explain this reversion. Please edit accordingly before you repost. Ikan Kekek (talk) 13:58, 9 June 2017 (UTC)

I'm not going to repeat myself, I'll only warn you that if you refuse to read that page and continue violating its guidelines, it will be necessary to temporarily block your posting privileges to try to get your attention. Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:09, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Excuse me but i dont understand why my article was delete, please tell me why, i ve read the page and i ve tried to change the bad thing this morning. If i done bad things, tell me what i need to change and i will do.

I will retry to post my article with the recommandtion of "Don't tout" page. I'll try to do my best, if you see a problem, please tell me and i will fix the problem. —The preceding comment was added by Beamanlepirate (talk • contribs)

Thanks for replying, and on talk pages like this one, please "sign" each post by typing 4 tildes (~) at the end of your post.

Your listing certainly is not the worst example of touting we've seen on this site. I'll post the latest version of the "content" tab here:

A family restaurant with a simple and efficient food. Factory Pizza and bar is an unique setting for eat Pizza, pasta and drinks beers and cocktails.Located just steps from the city center across the street from the famous Pub Street.

The last sentence is what's called "location touting" on this site. Instead, you should just provide coordinates and a street address and let that suffice. And then there's that word "unique". I guess any setting is unique. Is that really a selling point? I think any reader understands that this is an Italian eatery in Cambodia. So just describe the space and the food and drink briefly in a matter-of-fact way. Give it another try. Ikan Kekek (talk) 12:01, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for answer me. I understand where is the problem. I'll try to put a good version. Beamanlepirate (talk) 12:32, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Much better, thank you. Ikan Kekek (talk) 00:18, 13 June 2017 (UTC)