Talk:Pengzhou
Latest comment: 4 months ago by Piotrus in topic Please comment on article
Please comment on article[edit]
If there is anything you would like to add or make changes to, please leave your comments and suggestions. Roci xu (talk) 08:05, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Roci xu: I'm concerned that some of the coordinates in this article may not be accurate, as some of the locations don't seem to match what I see on Baidu Ditu. How did you gather the coordinates? Is it possible that you were using coordinates from the Chinese coordinate system? Our dynamic maps use the international coordinate system, so it's important to provide latitude and longitude based on that system (you can get the coordinates from OpenStreetMap or by converting them as described here). —Granger (talk · contribs) 15:21, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Mx. Granger Good catch again, looking forward to this being fixed. Piotrus (talk) 03:36, 19 December 2023 (UTC)
The article looks good to me, except that the hotel descriptions look like they were copied from the hotels' websites. For example:
- The Martha Garr Grand Hotel provides a great place for travelers to relax after a busy day. The Martha Garr Grand Hotel is an ideal choice for travelers who want to take in the sights and sounds of Pengzhou.
What does this tell the reader about the hotel? Really nothing. Any hotel in Pengzhou could make the same claim, and probably does. Does the hotel have a restaurant? Or a spa? Does it provide luxury accommodation, or budget, or in the middle? If we don't know anything about what services the hotel offers, or what level of accommodations it provides, we should just leave the "content" section empty. Ground Zero (talk) 12:09, 19 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Ground Zero True. @Roci xu - how can you address this, as well as the coordinates issue related above? Piotrus (talk) 03:10, 20 December 2023 (UTC)