User talk:Dbinni
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@Dbinni: thank you for the improvements you have made to the Pyeongtaek article. Here are some ways you can make it better:
- the first paragraph of an article should explain why a reader would want to visit a place. What makes it interesting, beyond just that it is a resort town?
- We know that the places listed are in Danyang-gun, Chungcheongbuk-do, because the article is called "Danyang". In English Wikivoyage, it is incorrect to include the city name in the address tabs of listings, unless the listing is in a different city (i.e., not in Danyang).
Please make these changes. Thank you.
Also, we write prices as "₩1,000", not "1,000 won". See the box at the top of Talk:South Korea. I have made this change for you. Ground Zero (talk) 12:20, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Dbinni: why do you ignore the advice I have given you about listings? You have made the same mistakes here. It is not the job of other editors to correct your errors. You must do it. Ground Zero (talk) 11:56, 11 November 2024 (UTC)
- I removed your edits here because of the errors I have explained above. If you do not understand, please ask another student, or your professor, @Hanyangprofessor2:, to explain it to you. You can add this information again if you remove "Pyeongtaek-si" from the addresses in the listings. Ground Zero (talk) 12:07, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, I sincerely apologize for the delayed response to your comment.
- Due to not being able to review your previous feedback on time, similar mistakes occurred during the additional editing process without incorporating your suggestions.
- I truly appreciate your feedback and will make the necessary corrections based on your input.
- Thank you very much for your advice. Dbinni (talk) 13:01, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- It is important to read your talk page to avoid making the same mistakes over and over. Ground Zero (talk) 13:19, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- I removed your edits here because of the errors I have explained above. If you do not understand, please ask another student, or your professor, @Hanyangprofessor2:, to explain it to you. You can add this information again if you remove "Pyeongtaek-si" from the addresses in the listings. Ground Zero (talk) 12:07, 3 December 2024 (UTC)