User talk:SU YIQI
Feedback (Reviewed article)
[edit]Dear Su Yiqi,
I would like to give you some feedback on your wikivoyage article Yichang.
First of all, I really enjoyed reading your article. It has a good structure and gives the most important information about the city.
I particularly like that you added coordinates to each listing. Here I would recommend you to add a mapframe so that the visitor of your article page knows where the listings are located. Further information on mapframes can be found on TemplateːMapframe.
Furthermore, you could also add a "Climate" section to improve your article. We learnt how to add a climate chart during one of Piotr's lectures. You can find some information about it on Template:Climate.
In my article about Heide, I added both the mapframe and the climate section. Feel free to use it as a guideline for your articleǃ
The last two minor improvements I could think ofː linking to a website in the "Get in" section, where you can buy bus and train tickets and converting the hotels mentioned in the "Sleep" section into a listing so that they appear in the mapframe.
Kind regards, VaneTrz20 (talk) 04:32, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
Thank you for adding information to this article. In some of your changes, you have made errors. Please make the following corrections to your work:
- In Wikivoyage, we write prices in China articles like this: "¥45", not "CNY45".
- In China articles, we use the 24-hour clock: we write "09:00-17:00". In countries that use the 12-hour clock, we write: "9AM-5PM".
- This article is about Enshi City, Hubei Province, China. We don't repeat that information in each listing.
Thank you. Ground Zero (talk) 13:32, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you for the correction, I will make changes right away SU YIQI (talk) 13:40, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
- @SU YIQI: why are you adding "Enshi City, Enshi Tujia and Miao Autonomous Prefecture, Hubei Province, China" to listings in the Enshi article? Why? Please stop doing that, and fix your mistakes. This is not the Wikivoyage style. See Wikivoyage:Listings under address. If you do this again, I will block you from editing further. Ground Zero (talk) 14:59, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
- And correct this error in Huangshi, too. Ground Zero (talk) 15:01, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you for the correction, I will make changes right away SU YIQI (talk) 17:43, 18 December 2023 (UTC)